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Warm Souls by ~lovingangstaboy:iconlovingangstaboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Let's lay here
In the snow,
And let
The whole world go.
Just lay here
In my arms,
And nothing
Can cause us harm.
Just lay here.

Forget the world,
It's problems and pain.
It's just us
And the frozen rain.
So hold me close
As the snow falls.
I don't need the world,
I'm holding it all.

Let's lay here
In the snow,
And let
The whole world go.

I'll hold you close
For all of time.
Under the moon
Reciting you rhymes.
I'll hold you close
As the snow blows around.
Keeping us warm
On the cold, beautiful ground.

Let's lay here
In the snow.
And let
The whole world go.
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I wrote this up at Catalooche Ski Resort watching it snow.
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~liquidanxiety:iconliquidanxiety: Jan 19, 2008, 1:53:57 AM
Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I love this poem

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“I'm hard to get away from, because I won't let you till I'm done.” –Mckay

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~lovingangstaboy:iconlovingangstaboy: Jan 19, 2008, 10:09:04 AM
:-D thank you

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I try to be a priceless friend,
While you're the friend I can't afford
~31Enrose36:icon31Enrose36: Jan 19, 2008, 12:08:20 PM
this is sooooooooooooooooo beautiful.
i adore this line:
I don't need the world,
I'm holding it all.
you're so sickeningly sweet, tim.

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Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again. -- Romeo & Juliet
~lovingangstaboy:iconlovingangstaboy: Jan 19, 2008, 8:21:44 PM
im like dark chocolate?

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I try to be a priceless friend,
While you're the friend I can't afford
~31Enrose36:icon31Enrose36: Jan 20, 2008, 7:12:55 AM
yes!
except for too much isn't gross.

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Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again. -- Romeo & Juliet
~lovingangstaboy:iconlovingangstaboy: Jan 20, 2008, 10:31:56 AM
too much of me or too much of dark chocolate is gross? cause too much dark chocolate is pretty gross to me

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I try to be a priceless friend,
While you're the friend I can't afford
~31Enrose36:icon31Enrose36: Jan 20, 2008, 11:35:07 AM
too much dark chocolate is too much.
too much timmy isn't enough!

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Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again. -- Romeo & Juliet
~lovingangstaboy:iconlovingangstaboy: Jan 20, 2008, 10:40:57 PM
yay! youre such a charmer yeom :)

wait... are you trying to get into my pants? :evileye:

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I try to be a priceless friend,
While you're the friend I can't afford
~31Enrose36:icon31Enrose36: Jan 20, 2008, 10:43:26 PM
no.
you don't have abs.


check out my "this i believe" thing.
i need your opinion!

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Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again. -- Romeo & Juliet
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